The rule of the major-generals was perceived as harsh because it was associated with the brutal crushing of Penruddock’s Rising in Wiltshire in March 1655. Indeed the major-generals’ experiment that followed had the effect of creating the legend of Cromwell as a military dictator. Equally damaging were the order received by the major-generals including banning horse races, cock fighting and stage plays. The reaction against this experiment can be seen in Source B in which the historian, well informed and reliable, attacks the major generals as “the most intolerable experience England ever had”.
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另外在写历史答案的时候,有些短语也是会经常用到的,这里给小伙伴们总结了一些:
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X is a modern historian and therefore well informed and reliable.
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